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Stefano Carini's avatar

I think it’s a beautiful piece on forgiveness at its core.

Thanks for sharing.

Miracle Path's avatar

Thank you, I'm glad it touched you.

Helen J's avatar

A moving poem, develops strength as it weaves its path towards a striking conclusion.

Miracle Path's avatar

That means so much to me, thank you. I’m glad the poem’s path spoke to you in that way.

Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

Love this, carrying flowers is such an evocative image. Flowers have so much to teach us. So brave of you to let go of the burden of what you were given and chose a different path. Watch out for my language of flowers posts you may enjoy them.

Miracle Path's avatar

Thank you ,I’d love to read your language of flowers posts.

Ink and Light by Nat Hale's avatar

They are notes, not sure how to link you to them but check my page and they will be there. So far dandelions, bindweed, sunflowers, mallow and pansy Looking forward to reading more of what you have written

Miracle Path's avatar

Lovely, I’ll definitely be checking them 🤍

Laura Coleman's avatar

Beautiful! What a gorgeous poem, I love the image of you carrying these flowers and letting go of the stones of your family, your past, your burdens. I’m new on here and would love your support. Here is my latest post if you feel inspired to restack or subscribe it would be much appreciated. 🙏🏼

https://substack.com/@fairiesandgnomes/note/c-153625684?r=19igav&utm_medium=ios&utm_source=notes-share-action

Miracle Path's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words 🤍 I’m touched that the imagery spoke to you. Welcome here .

I’ll definitely check out your post. Grateful our paths crossed in this space.

Laura Coleman's avatar

Thanks for your reply and support that means a lot!

The Soul Codes's avatar

I love this! So brave of you to choose not to bear the burden of your lineage and transform it in something lighter. You will be a magnificent future ancestor 🙏🏻

Miracle Path's avatar

Grateful for your words 💖

Hina Gondal's avatar

This is so beautiful…keep writing🫶🏻

Miracle Path's avatar

Thank you 🌸 I’m glad it touched you.